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third century usurper

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sickly pale, deathly pale,
his skin the colour of a new moon,
a false god in the dim light.

they always said,
"we look down on idolatry"
and i never knew why,
i always thought the symmetry
of sacrifice spoke brutal truths
about the nature of
Man and God

the romans did it
why can't i?

enamoured by the fallacy of honesty,
i break the lambs neck with my left hand.
and with the other, i carve patterns.
old enochian and languages
spoken by those buried in history and time.
(or maybe those are the same thing?)

he's like a roman dream
hair in glorious disarray; triumphant

i paint myself a picture, burn the lamb
burn the ashes, burn my fingertips
(injury indicates dedication, and i, for one,
feel luxuriously accustomed to attest to the fact

roman soldiers wanted suffering
scattered messianic festivals, darling flee)

the smoke sails forward and scalds my eyes,
but he was never much to look at.

prospects, my dear.
a god could be amongst your lovers,
with hair like a crow's nest at midnight
and complexion so white had he not been
immortal, you'd think him dead

the ghastly king of hell,
envious of my glowing glory

a god could be amongst your lovers,
little lamb.

be the sacrifice,
pro magnus dei

hosanna! hosanna in the highest!
for the great god

written: november 10, 2013

edited: nov. 11, 2013 ; nov. 21, 2013
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ninjagirl371321's avatar
The idea of this is super cool. You kind of toy with a number of unspoken cultural taboos and play with them beautifully. You also packed so much meaning into so few words, I had to read it over a few times to really soak it in (which I mean as 100% compliment... not so sure it came out that way). You're such an amazing poet. Your stylistic touches give all your work a great voice too, like the lack of punctuation, etc. Here it really lends to the heretical themes beautifully