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she was a star
shone bright in the
moonlight and even
in the sun when the
skyscapes reigned blue.

she was a star but
she was a constellation
only recognised
when the skies
were dark and
she wasnt alone.

she was a star and
she was a constellation
but there were
so many more
stars with
so many less
scars and

she was alone.
despite that
she shone
bright on the far
side of the galaxy because
it was in her nature;

she was a star.
though in the scheme of things she was still microscopic

i dont know if i like the last stanza, i'm not totally happy with it. if anyone has any suggestions or criticisms, i would love to hear! thank you♥
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